Intelligence
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(10-04-2024, 10:27 PM)rowens Wrote:  Intelligence

Better to be cuckoo
sitting on the wire 
introducing spring.

Crow knows
when the chicken
has laid an egg.

Better not to be a bird, necessarily. The thin/thick line and spring is a new


Crow knows , as the knowing is the crow isn't great to know the new born, cuz the crow is raven and death


-- it blows his world apart


Is that what you were going at? 
Yeah. You've give me a bit more to think about there Rowens. 
I'm wondering now if 'raven' is a better symbol and I'm still thinking on that first stanza, not so sure about the sentiment of 'better to be the cuckoo'... you're right about better not to be a bird.
feedback award wae aye man ye radgie
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Messages In This Thread
Intelligence - by Magpie - 10-02-2024, 07:32 PM
RE: Intelligence - by Bunx - 10-02-2024, 11:09 PM
RE: Intelligence - by Magpie - 10-04-2024, 02:45 PM
RE: Intelligence - by busker - 10-04-2024, 05:59 AM
RE: Intelligence - by rowens - 10-04-2024, 10:27 PM
RE: Intelligence - by Magpie - 10-05-2024, 06:43 PM
RE: Intelligence - by busker - 10-05-2024, 06:42 PM
RE: Intelligence - by Magpie - 10-06-2024, 03:57 PM
RE: Intelligence - by Valerie Please - 10-15-2024, 05:56 AM
RE: Intelligence - by Magpie - 10-16-2024, 04:07 AM



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