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Revolutions Swallow

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Metavariable loon, sir.

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10-04-2024, 02:41 PM

Nicely done Bunx,
I particularly like the line 'he becomes an imploding blossom', it is an excellent image.

Cheers for the read

wae aye man ye radgie

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Revolutions Swallow - by Bunx - 10-02-2024, 11:03 PM

RE: Revolutions Swallow - by Bunx - 10-03-2024, 10:54 PM

RE: Revolutions Swallow - by Magpie - 10-04-2024, 02:41 PM

RE: Revolutions Swallow - by Bunx - 10-04-2024, 11:00 PM

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