Seed

[Valerie Please]

I really like that line "gravity within birth."

I'd replace touch with maybe
"Fall to earth"
It is a cliche but literally
Isn't gravity needed for seeds.

Or "gravity within birth
The earth touches me"

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Thank you for the read and the feedback
It's good to know when the central idea isn't coming across.

xo,

Val

Ball seems subjective to me.

It makes sense to see it that way, must be the confusion with shape that seems odd to me. 
Perhaps 'bundle' or likewise would put the idea across better.