Seed
#3
I'd replace touch with maybe
"Fall to earth"
It is a cliche but literally
Isn't gravity needed for seeds.

Or "gravity within birth
The earth touches me"
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
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Seed - by Valerie Please - 09-15-2024, 01:21 AM
RE: Seed - by DeluxDelightful - 09-15-2024, 04:00 AM
RE: Seed - by Bunx - 09-16-2024, 02:36 AM
RE: Seed - by Valerie Please - 09-18-2024, 12:58 AM
RE: Seed - by Magpie - 09-16-2024, 04:13 AM
RE: Seed - by Bunx - 09-16-2024, 04:41 AM
RE: Seed - by Magpie - 09-16-2024, 04:50 AM
RE: Seed - by Bunx - 09-18-2024, 01:50 AM
RE: Seed - by WiredWild327 - 09-18-2024, 02:04 AM
RE: Seed - by Valerie Please - 09-18-2024, 04:20 AM



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