Audience Hesitation - edit 3, title change 2

[Knot]

Hi duke,
don't think the title's an improvement. (Wondered about 'Cost/Benefit' but seems a tad cold. Perhaps take 'Foreknowledge' from the revision?)
'grow attached' isn't there either. 'Take the risk'?

I did wonder if you really need S2 at all.


You want to know before
the movie starts,
the novel draws you in,
not as a spoiler, YouTube™ clip
or liner note
(that would be cheating)–

what you want, no, need to know
(what all consumers want to know .............. 'want' needs another look, I think. Maybe 'seek'?
before we grow attached)
is if they leave as lovers.


(should 'if they leave as lovers' be in italics? Is 'if' right? Do? Will?)

Best, Knot

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