09-15-2024, 07:50 AM
edit2;
Story Hesitation
You want to know before
the movie starts,
the novel draws you in,
not as a spoiler, YouTube clip
or liner note
(that would be cheating)–
nor need you foreknow
if there will be shooting,
flames, defeat, romantic interludes,
partings and reunions,
degradation, even loss of limbs:
no, what you need to know
(what all consumers want to know
before we grow attached)
is if they leave as lovers.
Many thanks to all the critics. I've tried to address each suggestion, including a title change. This may not be the final title.
Story Hesitation
You want to know before
the movie starts,
the novel draws you in,
not as a spoiler, YouTube clip
or liner note
(that would be cheating)–
nor need you foreknow
if there will be shooting,
flames, defeat, romantic interludes,
partings and reunions,
degradation, even loss of limbs:
no, what you need to know
(what all consumers want to know
before we grow attached)
is if they leave as lovers.
Many thanks to all the critics. I've tried to address each suggestion, including a title change. This may not be the final title.
Non-practicing atheist

