Audience Hesitation - edit 3, title change 2

[Valerie Please]

It's another minor suggestion, but to my ear "before we get sucked in" sounds more natural than "stuck in." Unless you have a reason for that phrasing, maybe consider it.

xo,
Val

Buyer Indecision


You want to know before
the movie starts,
the novel takes you in,
not as a spoiler, YouTube™ clip
or liner note
(that would be cheating)–

not if there will be shooting,
detonations and romantic interests,
partings and reunion,
stress, degradation, maybe loss of limbs:

no, what you want to know
(what all consumers want to know
before we get stuck in)
is if they leave as lovers.

original version;

Buyer Indecision


You want to know before
the movie starts,
the novel takes you in,
not as a spoiler, YouTube™ clip
or liner note
(that would be cheating)–

not if there will be shooting,
detonations and romantic interests,
partings and reunion,
stress, degradation, maybe loss of limbs:

no, what you want to know
(what we all want to know)
before we get stuck in
is if they leave as lovers.