Sharing the Last Mandarin(edit 2)

[Knot]

Hi Bryn.

At the risk of annoying yet further.


so easily undressed-
tip of thumb working
the cleft of skin and flesh
where scent becomes sweetness
a wash across the tongue;
How delicious it is
wanting another.

Maybe think about an alternative to 'delicious'?

Best, Knot.


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