Audience Hesitation - edit 3, title change 2

[brynmawr1]

Buyer Indecision


You want to know before
the movie starts,
the novel takes you in,
not as a spoiler, YouTube™ clip
or liner note
(that would be cheating)–

not if there will be shooting,
detonations and romantic interests,
partings and reunion,    reunions, for sonics and some consistency?
stress, degradation, maybe loss of limbs:

no, what you want to know
(what all consumers want to know
before we get stuck in)   I keep wanting it to be 'sucked in'.  and I liked the shorter parenthetical. 
is if they leave as lovers.

original version;

Buyer Indecision


You want to know before
the movie starts,
the novel takes you in,
not as a spoiler, YouTube™ clip
or liner note
(that would be cheating)–

not if there will be shooting,
detonations and romantic interests,
partings and reunion,
stress, degradation, maybe loss of limbs:

no, what you want to know
(what we all want to know)
before we get stuck in
is if they leave as lovers.

Hi Duke,
I like the  progression of the examples through the first two stanzas and the ending.  Made some minor suggestions to consider.  Also thought maybe change title to use consumer and go back to 'we' in last stanza.  eg 'Consumerism' or 'Consumer's Heart' but actually clever.
Thanks for the read,
Bryn