09-14-2024, 04:55 AM
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Buyer Indecision
You want to know before
the movie starts,
the novel takes you in,
not as a spoiler, YouTube clip
or liner note
(that would be cheating)–
not if there will be shooting,
detonations and romantic interests,
partings and reunion,
stress, degradation, maybe loss of limbs:
no, what you want to know
(what all consumers want to know
before we get stuck in)
is if they leave as lovers.
Thanx, @Bunx, for the good critique. I tried several ways to apply the consumer idea and replacing "you," but wound up with this minimal change.
Buyer Indecision
You want to know before
the movie starts,
the novel takes you in,
not as a spoiler, YouTube clip
or liner note
(that would be cheating)–
not if there will be shooting,
detonations and romantic interests,
partings and reunion,
stress, degradation, maybe loss of limbs:
no, what you want to know
(what all consumers want to know
before we get stuck in)
is if they leave as lovers.
Thanx, @Bunx, for the good critique. I tried several ways to apply the consumer idea and replacing "you," but wound up with this minimal change.
Non-practicing atheist

