Attack (revised)
#9
I really appreciate the feedback guys, keep it coming. Smile
I am open to a lot of the points given here, but its going to take some simmering.
Have you ever had a poem that just sat for months or years before you felt it was 'finished?'
That's what this poem might be for me. XD
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Messages In This Thread
Attack (revised) - by SpruceMoose - 09-06-2024, 09:38 AM
RE: Attack - by rowens - 09-06-2024, 01:50 PM
RE: Attack - by micah3801 - 09-07-2024, 08:22 AM
RE: Attack - by SpruceMoose - 09-07-2024, 08:21 PM
RE: Attack - by 71degrees - 09-08-2024, 11:13 AM
RE: Attack - by SpruceMoose - 09-08-2024, 07:22 PM
RE: Attack (revised) - by Wjames - 09-10-2024, 08:48 AM
RE: Attack (revised) - by busker - 09-11-2024, 05:21 AM
RE: Attack (revised) - by SpruceMoose - 09-11-2024, 06:00 AM
RE: Attack (revised) - by busker - 09-11-2024, 06:23 AM
RE: Attack (revised) - by Gerryswo - 12-05-2024, 01:30 PM
RE: Attack (revised) - by Pebbel~Lady - 01-28-2025, 03:40 AM
RE: Attack (revised) - by TrevorConway - 01-28-2025, 05:05 AM
RE: Attack (revised) - by CircleWalker - 02-09-2025, 03:51 AM



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