09-11-2024, 06:00 AM
I really appreciate the feedback guys, keep it coming. 
I am open to a lot of the points given here, but its going to take some simmering.
Have you ever had a poem that just sat for months or years before you felt it was 'finished?'
That's what this poem might be for me. XD

I am open to a lot of the points given here, but its going to take some simmering.
Have you ever had a poem that just sat for months or years before you felt it was 'finished?'
That's what this poem might be for me. XD

