Alcoholic
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It’s too bad that you can’t make eyes more phallic somehow. I think that’s just what this poem needs, a blatantly phallic symbol.Maybe he could be crying into a nice long bottle, so he’s returning his salt to the father ship…and then maybe make a stab at connecting it all to toxic masculinity?
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Alcoholic - by rowens - 09-09-2024, 12:43 AM
RE: Alcoholic - by Valerie Please - 09-09-2024, 02:32 AM
RE: Alcoholic - by rowens - 09-09-2024, 03:01 AM
RE: Alcoholic - by Bunx - 09-09-2024, 11:19 PM
RE: Alcoholic - by rowens - 09-10-2024, 01:03 AM
RE: Alcoholic - by Bunx - 09-10-2024, 05:18 AM
RE: Alcoholic - by rowens - 09-10-2024, 05:59 AM



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