09-08-2024, 03:58 AM
"Simple" truths within a complicated poem.
The truth I get are weeds and wildflowers are a matter of opinion. Mastering a garden is mastering chaos?
Though I see words like "fists" and rectangles (city blocks) and I think of city blocks maybe graffiti artists or even gangs vs mural artists. When a property owner (in our world) would love a "Banksy". Whoever is the most visible gets the most attention or sun? It's like the gardener is playing God or giving up on it.
I feel like wanted or weed could be an alternative title. Invasive weeds in nature destroy wild flowers, herbs, ect. This could symbolically could be about gangs or gentrification depending on the reader / city planner / gardeners might tell you to plant separately. I really love this poem and my ideas of the "extra". As the writer you might want to know where one may take this "simple" poem
Thanks for the edits and read
The truth I get are weeds and wildflowers are a matter of opinion. Mastering a garden is mastering chaos?
Though I see words like "fists" and rectangles (city blocks) and I think of city blocks maybe graffiti artists or even gangs vs mural artists. When a property owner (in our world) would love a "Banksy". Whoever is the most visible gets the most attention or sun? It's like the gardener is playing God or giving up on it.
I feel like wanted or weed could be an alternative title. Invasive weeds in nature destroy wild flowers, herbs, ect. This could symbolically could be about gangs or gentrification depending on the reader / city planner / gardeners might tell you to plant separately. I really love this poem and my ideas of the "extra". As the writer you might want to know where one may take this "simple" poem

Thanks for the edits and read
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
Bunx

