09-08-2024, 03:38 AM
(08-21-2024, 11:11 PM)Mark A Becker Wrote: currencyAs far as the poem I love it as if structurally. The meaning I think is double.
when you say I love you
I value that
as purely transactional
a cold calculation
I no longer find currency
in your counterfeit idea
of family
If the narrators spouse comes from privilege and money that love might as well be real and genuine in a capitalist society. We all are taught to want more, and do less with our free time equating to "do more to make money". We become indebt to our spouses expectations.
I feel like this poems victim....
It's the tone of the narrator it reads like
A cold contract being broken
By someone broken....
I just wanted to makes these notes to hint at
Where a reader might take this... Falling out of love with privilege and bread winner mentality.
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
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