crying uncle
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(08-21-2024, 11:11 PM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  currency

when you say I love you
I value that
as purely transactional

a cold calculation

I no longer find currency
in your counterfeit idea
of family





currency

You say, “I love you.” I value that
as purely transactional.

Your calculation of love is based
solely upon your bottom line.

You sold the bond between us
for pennies on the dollar,

and I no longer find currency
in your counterfeit idea of family.
As far as the poem I love it as if structurally. The meaning I think is double.
If the narrators spouse comes from privilege and money that love might as well be real and genuine in a capitalist society. We all are taught to want more, and do less with our free time equating to "do more to make money". We become indebt to our spouses expectations.

I feel like this poems victim....
It's the tone of the narrator it reads like
A cold contract being broken
By someone broken....

I just wanted to makes these notes to hint at
Where a reader might take this... Falling out of love with privilege and bread winner mentality.
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
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Messages In This Thread
crying uncle - by Mark A Becker - 08-21-2024, 11:11 PM
RE: currency - by brynmawr1 - 08-22-2024, 01:10 PM
RE: currency - by Tiger the Lion - 08-22-2024, 04:15 PM
RE: currency - by Mark A Becker - 08-22-2024, 07:43 PM
RE: currency - by bianca.a.palmisano - 09-07-2024, 11:16 AM
RE: currency - by Bunx - 09-08-2024, 03:38 AM
RE: currency - by dukealien - 09-08-2024, 07:23 AM
RE: crying uncle - by Mark A Becker - 10-20-2024, 05:38 PM
RE: crying uncle - by Grady VanWright - 01-14-2025, 01:34 PM



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