Untilled
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(09-05-2024, 01:06 AM)Bunx Wrote:  This reads like a short story I want more of. Being bi I want to know the narrators gender identity. I assume she is a maid working for the boss ladies. The man bring a slave a future lover. Maybe a crush. This is great Smile. If the narrator was a guy though. Yes please. Haha

Favorite lines
"Pitless
Pointless
Power"

I told that as racism is not true and could die in contrast to the universal truth of love within hardship.
I guess the narrator is me, although it doesn't have to be ;0) An interesting interpretation, glad you liked it!
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Untilled - by JamesG - 09-04-2024, 07:34 PM
RE: Untilled - by brynmawr1 - 09-04-2024, 10:01 PM
RE: Untilled - by Bunx - 09-05-2024, 01:06 AM
RE: Untilled - by JamesG - 09-05-2024, 10:14 PM



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