After the Sertraline
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The poem has a different meaning once I understood (looked up) what Sertraline was, as I at first thought the poem might be alluding to a person rather than a substance; I assume the ambiguity is intentional?

Personally, I would change the first "where" to "when", and I am not sure the "and no one say boo" line is working, but it is a cool poem nonetheless.
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After the Sertraline - by Tiger the Lion - 08-29-2024, 11:26 AM
RE: After the Sertraline - by Collapsed We Swear - 08-29-2024, 11:42 AM
RE: After the Sertraline - by brynmawr1 - 08-29-2024, 12:35 PM
RE: After the Sertraline - by Tiger the Lion - 08-29-2024, 12:41 PM
RE: After the Sertraline - by busker - 08-29-2024, 12:36 PM
RE: After the Sertraline - by RiverNotch - 08-29-2024, 03:07 PM
RE: After the Sertraline - by Tiger the Lion - 09-01-2024, 10:17 AM
RE: After the Sertraline - by brynmawr1 - 09-01-2024, 11:09 AM
RE: After the Sertraline - by JamesG - 09-01-2024, 05:11 PM



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