09-01-2024, 05:11 PM
The poem has a different meaning once I understood (looked up) what Sertraline was, as I at first thought the poem might be alluding to a person rather than a substance; I assume the ambiguity is intentional?
Personally, I would change the first "where" to "when", and I am not sure the "and no one say boo" line is working, but it is a cool poem nonetheless.
Personally, I would change the first "where" to "when", and I am not sure the "and no one say boo" line is working, but it is a cool poem nonetheless.

