After the Sertraline

[brynmawr1]

After the Sertraline

where once 
you were an unsplit atom

snug in some cubbyhole
where the rent was low 
and no one said boo      needs some sort of punctuation here

now you're a bloody big bang 
at the door

and I can't say 
I wasn't expecting you.

Hey Tiger,
I thought we talked about you posting these great poems in non critique forums.   
That said, i am going to critique it.  First I would cut 'the' from the title.
My next sticking point is- that I am glad I didn't post before reading it several more times.
Take care,
Bryn