70's Love Song(edit)

[brynmawr1]

I really like this poem, it sets a loving, domestic scene very well, there is something very seductive about it. My only caveat would be,I think, that I would prefer the stanzas and line breaks to be more consistent, except the last three lines, and I am not a fan of the “Have I told you lately that I love you?”, which seems a bit too obvious.

Overall it is great though, well done.

Hi James,
Thanks for reading and commenting.  I have always been a little unsure how to integrate the lyrics without being too much of one thing or another.  I have been meaning to come back to this one so thanks for bring it back to my attention.
Bryn