08-18-2024, 09:32 PM
So I made a v2 and placed it above. I am not able to expand it yet--though I am entirely for it--the force isn't with me at the moment.
I did change puerility just to see if a different image would be a better and less redundant fit.
I don't mean to offend anyone as far as the ttile and learning disabilities go. But often I do feel like "me fail english, thats umpossible." Because honestly I am not good at the technical aspects of language, it has been very difficult for me to grasp.
Kind of an inside joke that oddly tied into the s4 of the poem.
I really appreciate the feedback, keep it coming!
I did change puerility just to see if a different image would be a better and less redundant fit.
I don't mean to offend anyone as far as the ttile and learning disabilities go. But often I do feel like "me fail english, thats umpossible." Because honestly I am not good at the technical aspects of language, it has been very difficult for me to grasp.
Kind of an inside joke that oddly tied into the s4 of the poem.
I really appreciate the feedback, keep it coming!