70's Love Song(edit)

[JamesG]

I really like this poem, it sets a loving, domestic scene very well, there is something very seductive about it. My only caveat would be,I think, that I would prefer the stanzas and line breaks to be more consistent, except the last three lines, and I am not a fan of the “Have I told you lately that I love you?”, which seems a bit too obvious.

Overall it is great though, well done.