Frozen blossom

[Bunx]

Jack

You have bested me again
Winter
With your clever endeavour
grasping on with your frost-bitten hands
Awaken sun and spite the cold
Warm the day and colourise the flowers
Make them beautiful, bright and bold
Run through the trees
Awaken the flora
Ring spring, throughout the land
Tell Winter their work is done
Now begone
The world is in my command
To those who seek me, I will come
Find me in the morning dew
With blooming buds and vibrant hues, I'll paint the world anew

Hmm not bad... These read like lyrics... almost like hooks. If you want to write a poem group these lines into stanzas, and maybe show they work in a verity of different ways.

I'd use these to write a song though. I love the content but to be a poem I think it needs some exploring.