Blood Red
#6
My take on your poem.




A kitchen wartorn;
our favorite place to fight.

Our bedroom a battlefield
where love is made and war,
then love again.

Could we leave it all behind;
mend the fence and rebuild the chapel
or do we make the hell of our childhood
our home?  My plea-

let our pain rest;
the enemy is inside us
but it is not who we are.

It takes tender hands to make a nest;
one we have never known.

My white flag flashes 
in your bloodshot heart.

Please don't
pick up the knife
I've just put down.
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Blood Red - by SpruceMoose - 08-11-2024, 10:23 PM
RE: Blood Red - by brynmawr1 - 08-12-2024, 02:12 AM
RE: Blood Red - by SpruceMoose - 08-12-2024, 03:46 AM
RE: Blood Red - by brynmawr1 - 08-12-2024, 06:20 AM
RE: Blood Red - by SpruceMoose - 08-12-2024, 06:34 AM
RE: Blood Red - by brynmawr1 - 08-12-2024, 01:20 PM
RE: Blood Red - by SpruceMoose - 08-15-2024, 05:27 AM



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