08-12-2024, 01:20 PM
My take on your poem.
A kitchen wartorn;
our favorite place to fight.
Our bedroom a battlefield
where love is made and war,
then love again.
Could we leave it all behind;
mend the fence and rebuild the chapel
or do we make the hell of our childhood
our home? My plea-
let our pain rest;
the enemy is inside us
but it is not who we are.
It takes tender hands to make a nest;
one we have never known.
My white flag flashes
in your bloodshot heart.
Please don't
pick up the knife
I've just put down.
A kitchen wartorn;
our favorite place to fight.
Our bedroom a battlefield
where love is made and war,
then love again.
Could we leave it all behind;
mend the fence and rebuild the chapel
or do we make the hell of our childhood
our home? My plea-
let our pain rest;
the enemy is inside us
but it is not who we are.
It takes tender hands to make a nest;
one we have never known.
My white flag flashes
in your bloodshot heart.
Please don't
pick up the knife
I've just put down.

