Scarecrow

[JamesG]

Thanks everybody for your criticism, very useful, I will look at the poem and re-edit it. Some of the content I am not too comfortable losing as the poem is inspired by a dream a had as a child in which I could reach down and pick holes in my skin and see straw inside of my feet, an image than never left me. I was also quite obsessed with the Wizard of Oz at the time hence the references to that film, but I can tone them down I think.

A shame you don't like the "random waif" Line, Busker, as I was quite pleased with that oblique reference to Dorothy ;0)