08-07-2024, 08:32 AM
Mark,
Thanks for the critique
" it left me with the impression of a ghost town that is still occupied." Mark, your description may be more apt than mine -dale
I wish I could claim "Super Bowel" was not a typo, unfortunately it will need to be changed as it serves no purpose outside of being funny and though Shakespeare got away with such I don't think that I can. Too bad though. 'white men' always have a "Super Bowel," it's how they can read 'War and Peace' in one movement.
"that is exactly where they all have been living! don't think you need the '!'" I put there to emphasize the lack of living, but maybe it doesn't serve its intended purpose. will consider.
best,
dale
Thanks for the critique
" it left me with the impression of a ghost town that is still occupied." Mark, your description may be more apt than mine -dale
I wish I could claim "Super Bowel" was not a typo, unfortunately it will need to be changed as it serves no purpose outside of being funny and though Shakespeare got away with such I don't think that I can. Too bad though. 'white men' always have a "Super Bowel," it's how they can read 'War and Peace' in one movement.
"that is exactly where they all have been living! don't think you need the '!'" I put there to emphasize the lack of living, but maybe it doesn't serve its intended purpose. will consider.
best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.