07-30-2024, 05:26 AM
This seems to me to be a beautifully written poem about loss and family, themes that of course resonate with us all, I particularly love the last stanza.
I think the only part that might be a bit clunky is
red drunk she cursed
her wounds and the houses
that held them and the houses
that held them and
but that is just a quibble really, and that it could have a better title?
I think the only part that might be a bit clunky is
red drunk she cursed
her wounds and the houses
that held them and the houses
that held them and
but that is just a quibble really, and that it could have a better title?