07-10-2024, 10:03 PM
(07-05-2024, 06:31 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: Call of the Wild"[W]ater
I used to carry a quarter
if I needed to make a call
thought I was up the creek
without my phone today
but watching the water
fall
away from the city
and the news
I found myself
breathing again
smiled at the discovery-
a quarter in my pocket
fall" is a fun line
break.
I find myself very slightly confused by the two waterway images - up the creek and water/fall. Watching the falls from a canoe downstream? Certainly not approaching the falls from the upstream side! The overall sentiment is very good, especially remembering how to breath without a phone.
(During the interregnum before cells were universal, I got a page on my beeper, with phone number. But beepers are one-way... Was at the mall - remember those, pre-COVID? - and although I had a quarter the only public phone demanded a credit card.)
Non-practicing atheist

