Don to Dodge
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(07-06-2024, 05:42 AM)Bunx Wrote:  Don Trump dodges draft
His supporters are in prison 
A felon speaks sins
Effective use of "Don" as both syllable-reducing contraction and "The Godfather" reference.  Wondering why not "imprisoned," but it could raise questions about motives for their prosecution, so stet.

Why the old-fashioned start-of-line capitalization on a very contemporary senryu, though?
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Don to Dodge - by Bunx - 07-06-2024, 05:42 AM
RE: Don to Dodge - by dukealien - 07-10-2024, 09:49 PM
RE: Don to Dodge - by Bunx - 07-11-2024, 07:17 AM
RE: Don to Dodge - by rowens - 07-15-2024, 07:49 AM
RE: Don to Dodge - by Bunx - 08-13-2024, 10:48 PM



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