Summer Concerto - edit

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Summer Concerto


Well-watered trees
swaying their thousands
of leaf-greened boughs
asynchronously
conducting symphonies
which wind whistles
without comprehension
or false applause.

original version;

Well-watered trees
each sway thousands
of leaf-greened boughs
asynchronously
conducting symphonies
which wind whistles
without comprehension
or false applause.