The Dragon’s Dog — The Drake
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(06-27-2024, 05:36 PM)crow Wrote:  The Dragon’s Dog:
The Drake

The dragon learned to lamp bodies black, lamp as a verb is awkward 
to raisin blood in arteries, to make fire I'd apostrophe raisin' because of lamp
burn the stink from skulls through popped-out eyes.  Nice
Turn churches red. Mink children hot with ash.
Inhaling, quiet, the devil heard a crash 
where plates from a dining room where rubble, sliding where rubble trips me up because where plates 
toward a pit stalled, and a puppy’s eyes
beheld the drake. And she standed on her back nnot a fan of standed

legs and shook a little as she cried. Or the following and
He tried to fly away all night. But the puppy.
He burned his favorite cities down, but the puppy it's breaking down here towards the end, like a different narrator almost, almost mocking
just kept crying, oooooo, and he sang back, ooooooo.
And she was so cute. He fed her and lied  too many conjunctions perhaps
about the world, about cruelty.  I like the last sentence

I understand separting parts of a series but the title did throw me off, thansk for sharing
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The Dragon’s Dog — The Drake - by crow - 06-27-2024, 05:36 PM
RE: The Dragon’s Dog — The Drake - by crow - 06-29-2024, 04:54 PM
RE: The Dragon’s Dog — The Drake - by CRNDLSM - 06-30-2024, 03:56 AM
RE: The Dragon’s Dog — The Drake - by crow - 06-30-2024, 06:27 PM
RE: The Dragon’s Dog — The Drake - by busker - 06-30-2024, 11:06 PM



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