06-20-2024, 05:29 PM
It brynmawr1—I just had never heard of it. Zebra mussels are like cornflakes.
But are we missing something here? This poem
Is aesthetically dense. Is it powerful?
“headache corkscrews the wine
and you pour a glass alone”
This is interesting, yeah? You have a nonsensical line —a headache can’t corkscrew and wine can’t be corkscrewed—followed by a line describing a lexical phrase that’s obvious but peculiar. Like, why not, “you drink a glass alone”?
I think we’re missing something,
But are we missing something here? This poem
Is aesthetically dense. Is it powerful?
“headache corkscrews the wine
and you pour a glass alone”
This is interesting, yeah? You have a nonsensical line —a headache can’t corkscrew and wine can’t be corkscrewed—followed by a line describing a lexical phrase that’s obvious but peculiar. Like, why not, “you drink a glass alone”?
I think we’re missing something,
A yak is normal.