Angelique

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Angelique

She passes by 
on Tuesdays and Thursdays
a little past three
in the afternoon I like the specific time 

always wearing headphones
and bobbing her head 
to the beat of joy. While I have a pretty clear visual, this third line is weak, 

He hears the sound 
of a vacuum in the hall
and creeps to the peephole
for his twenty-second fix
of her narcotic, swaying hips so I think he's watching angelique, but does she pass by two days a week, or does she vacuum the hall (is she an employee of the co.plex that shares both of them.  And the narcotic swaying seems opposite of joy and bobbing

tangoing with a Hoover
to a song he cannot hear.

I like how the idea is portrayed, just a couple tones that need tweaking I think