Experimenting on critiquing lyrics, the challenge was write a country song using the words 'oaks, oldsmobile, and Texas ' I don't have a guitar part for it yet, just looking for thoughts and suggestions. Thank you!
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My baby left me for the city
Said I didn't know how to make her feel pretty
I'd rather have a party leave out the pity
Talking about a nitty gritty
If you asked me it's the weirdest of flexes
Trading in her oldsmobile for a Lexus
If she's gonna be the new queen of Texas
I'm prolly better off as one of her exes
I find the fields to let my wheels get muddy
Sitting round the fire drinking beer with my buddies
Plenty girls here to turn me to putty
Were looking for fun we don't need no money
My baby left me for the city
Said I didn't know how to make her feel pretty
I don't wanna waste my day feeling shitty
So I let it all out in a nitty gritty
She's hustling for money while swimming in debt
Staring at her ceiling, stressed and upset
I'm working outside, soaking in sweat
But I'll never regret enjoying that sunset
Goosebump breeze under shady oaks
Swinging on benches sipping tea with the old folks
Listening to crickets while the bullfrog croaks
I can do what i want while my brisket smokes
My baby left me for the city
Said I didn't know how to make her feel pretty
Let's have a party leave out the pity
Talking about the nitty gritty
My baby left me for the city
Said I didn't know how to make her feel pretty
Big o kitties but love was itty bitty
Talking about that nitty gritty
Edit:
She thought she would leave me for the city
Said I didn't know how to make her feel pretty
I'd rather have a party leave out the pity
Talking about a nitty gritty ditty
If you asked me it's the weirdest of flexes
Trading in her oldsmobile for a Lexus
If she's gonna be the new queen of Texas
I'm prolly better off as one of her exes
She's in the school struggling with studies
Trying to make friends without being slutty
While i found the fields to let my wheels get muddy
Sitting round the fire drinking beer with my buddies
She thought she would leave me for the city
Said I didn't know how to make her feel pretty
I don't wanna waste my day feeling shitty
So I let it all out in a nitty gritty ditty
She's hustling for money while swimming in debt
Staring at her ceiling, stressed and upset
I'm working outside, soaking in sweat
But I'll never regret enjoying that sunset
Goosebump breeze under shady oaks
Swinging on benches sipping tea with the old folks
Listening to crickets while the bullfrog croaks
We can do what we want while the brisket smokes
She thought she would leave me for the city
Said I didn't know how to make her feel pretty
Let's have a party leave out the pity
Talking about the nitty gritty ditty
Don't wanna waste the day feeling shitty
Let it all out in a nitty gritty ditty
Another line her love was itty bitty
Talk about it in a nitty gritty ditty
Original:
The love of my youth left me for the city
Said no one round here really made her feel pretty
A broken heart can feel pretty shitty
So I let it all out in a nitty gritty ditty
She dumped me and went on one of the weirdest flexes
Traded in her oldsmobile for a Lexus
Dreaming she'll one day be the queen of Texas
I might a dodged a bullet being one of her exes
Shed rather go to school and spend the day with her studies
Her so called friends expecting her to be slutty
While out on the weekend I let my wheels get muddy
Sitting round a fire shooting beer with my buddies
The love of my youth left me for the city
Said no one round here really made her feel pretty
A broken heart can feel pretty shitty
So I let it all out in a nitty gritty ditty
She's hustling for money, swimming in debt
Staring at her ceiling, stressed and upset
I'm outside for a minute soaking in sweat
But never regret enjoying each sunset
Goosebump breeze under shady oaks
Swinging on a bench sharing tea with the old folks
Listening to crickets while the bull frog croaks
I do what I want while the brisket smokes
The love of my youth left me for the city
Said no one round here really made her feel pretty
A broken heart can feel pretty shitty
So I let it all out in a nitty gritty ditty
For some people nothing will ever be enough
Gotta go out and load up with more stuff
Making your way in the world can be rough
Don't lose yourself while looking for love
Edit 2
My baby left me for the city
Said I didn't know how to make her feel pretty
I'd rather have a party leave out the pity
Talking about a nitty gritty
If you asked me it's the weirdest of flexes
Trading in her oldsmobile for a Lexus
If she's gonna be the new queen of Texas
I'm prolly better off as one of her exes
I find the fields to let my wheels get muddy
Sitting round the fire drinking beer with my buddies
Plenty girls here to turn me to putty
Were looking for fun we don't need no money
My baby left me for the city
Said I didn't know how to make her feel pretty
I don't wanna waste my day feeling shitty
So I let it all out in a nitty gritty
She's hustling for money while swimming in debt
Staring at her ceiling, stressed and upset
I'm working outside, soaking in sweat
But I'll never regret enjoying that sunset
Goosebump breeze under shady oaks
Swinging on benches sipping tea with the old folks
Listening to crickets while the bullfrog croaks
I can do what i want while my brisket smokes
My baby left me for the city
Said I didn't know how to make her feel pretty
Let's have a party leave out the pity
Talking about the nitty gritty
My baby left me for the city
Said I didn't know how to make her feel pretty
Big o kitties but love was itty bitty
Talking about that nitty gritty
Edit:
She thought she would leave me for the city
Said I didn't know how to make her feel pretty
I'd rather have a party leave out the pity
Talking about a nitty gritty ditty
If you asked me it's the weirdest of flexes
Trading in her oldsmobile for a Lexus
If she's gonna be the new queen of Texas
I'm prolly better off as one of her exes
She's in the school struggling with studies
Trying to make friends without being slutty
While i found the fields to let my wheels get muddy
Sitting round the fire drinking beer with my buddies
She thought she would leave me for the city
Said I didn't know how to make her feel pretty
I don't wanna waste my day feeling shitty
So I let it all out in a nitty gritty ditty
She's hustling for money while swimming in debt
Staring at her ceiling, stressed and upset
I'm working outside, soaking in sweat
But I'll never regret enjoying that sunset
Goosebump breeze under shady oaks
Swinging on benches sipping tea with the old folks
Listening to crickets while the bullfrog croaks
We can do what we want while the brisket smokes
She thought she would leave me for the city
Said I didn't know how to make her feel pretty
Let's have a party leave out the pity
Talking about the nitty gritty ditty
Don't wanna waste the day feeling shitty
Let it all out in a nitty gritty ditty
Another line her love was itty bitty
Talk about it in a nitty gritty ditty
Original:
The love of my youth left me for the city
Said no one round here really made her feel pretty
A broken heart can feel pretty shitty
So I let it all out in a nitty gritty ditty
She dumped me and went on one of the weirdest flexes
Traded in her oldsmobile for a Lexus
Dreaming she'll one day be the queen of Texas
I might a dodged a bullet being one of her exes
Shed rather go to school and spend the day with her studies
Her so called friends expecting her to be slutty
While out on the weekend I let my wheels get muddy
Sitting round a fire shooting beer with my buddies
The love of my youth left me for the city
Said no one round here really made her feel pretty
A broken heart can feel pretty shitty
So I let it all out in a nitty gritty ditty
She's hustling for money, swimming in debt
Staring at her ceiling, stressed and upset
I'm outside for a minute soaking in sweat
But never regret enjoying each sunset
Goosebump breeze under shady oaks
Swinging on a bench sharing tea with the old folks
Listening to crickets while the bull frog croaks
I do what I want while the brisket smokes
The love of my youth left me for the city
Said no one round here really made her feel pretty
A broken heart can feel pretty shitty
So I let it all out in a nitty gritty ditty
For some people nothing will ever be enough
Gotta go out and load up with more stuff
Making your way in the world can be rough
Don't lose yourself while looking for love
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