06-11-2024, 10:00 PM
edit;
Like a baby I do not
know if I’m right- or left-handed
some mornings,
which way the handle
on my coffee cup should point.
As for day-of-the-week
I know for sure of seven
and their names but which
I’ve just awakened to
can be out of reach.
At least my name
requires no written evidence–
not yet, but someday
I’ll wake up without it
and need christening.
Good critique - a little too flashy on those lines (which, as usual, were the last edited before posting). Now if I can just remember the "previous version" tag...
Like a baby I do not
know if I’m right- or left-handed
some mornings,
which way the handle
on my coffee cup should point.
As for day-of-the-week
I know for sure of seven
and their names but which
I’ve just awakened to
can be out of reach.
At least my name
requires no written evidence–
not yet, but someday
I’ll wake up without it
and need christening.
Good critique - a little too flashy on those lines (which, as usual, were the last edited before posting). Now if I can just remember the "previous version" tag...
Non-practicing atheist