Cold heart (song lyrics)
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knot,

This is exactly what will happen in a lyrics subforum. If I were to start talking about whether or not lyrics have choruses, it’d derail the feedback.

Do lyrics require choruses?

I don’t know.

I’ve written lots of songs without them. I’ve never asked myself if I should edit them to include a chorus.

I really don’t know.

If you ask career musicians what songs need a bridge and which ones need a chorus, they’ll say, “all of them.”

I don’t know.

Which Sonnets *require* a turn? Is it valid to crit a sonnet for lacking a turn?

What does a chorus do?

I don’t know.

Right now, most of what I think is squish.
A yak is normal.
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Messages In This Thread
Cold heart (song lyrics) - by busker - 06-08-2024, 10:03 PM
RE: Cold heart (song lyrics) - by CRNDLSM - 06-09-2024, 03:01 AM
RE: Cold heart (song lyrics) - by busker - 06-09-2024, 03:14 AM
RE: Cold heart (song lyrics) - by CRNDLSM - 06-09-2024, 04:43 AM
RE: Cold heart (song lyrics) - by Knot - 06-09-2024, 09:45 PM
RE: Cold heart (song lyrics) - by crow - 06-10-2024, 01:15 PM
RE: Cold heart (song lyrics) - by busker - 06-10-2024, 05:02 PM
RE: Cold heart (song lyrics) - by CRNDLSM - 06-10-2024, 08:43 PM
RE: Cold heart (song lyrics) - by Knot - 06-10-2024, 09:17 PM
RE: Cold heart (song lyrics) - by busker - 06-11-2024, 09:29 AM
RE: Cold heart (song lyrics) - by crow - 06-11-2024, 09:12 AM
RE: Cold heart (song lyrics) - by crow - 06-11-2024, 10:06 AM



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