Did you choose the format? You make it work (I looked up the song) pre hearing, my first thought for clarity was to rewrite it as:
See? It works
in monkeys.
You're right again
but it is a thin win.
BreathtakIngly
the Egg Thief.
His wins are thin
avocet and peregrine.
Yer beautiful terrific.
Your eyes empty Pacifics.
Man Machine Poem
Man Machine Poem
So when translated to song you can include the 'man machine poem' as a refrain, it's still written as a repeat, but it's condensed fot clarity on paper. Is it still the same poem? I don't know, maybe if the author did it
See? It works
in monkeys.
You're right again
but it is a thin win.
BreathtakIngly
the Egg Thief.
His wins are thin
avocet and peregrine.
Yer beautiful terrific.
Your eyes empty Pacifics.
Man Machine Poem
Man Machine Poem
So when translated to song you can include the 'man machine poem' as a refrain, it's still written as a repeat, but it's condensed fot clarity on paper. Is it still the same poem? I don't know, maybe if the author did it
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