Man, Machine, Poem (lyrics)

[Tiger the Lion]

Crow had asked for a live example to crit. I purposely picked something outside of the norm. (if there is a norm)
*** This is not my work. I will credit appropriately as we go...

Man, Machine, Poem

See?
It works
in monkeys.
You're right
again
but it is a thin win.

Man Machine Poem

Breathtake-
Ingly
the Egg Thief.
His wins
are thin
avocet and peregrine.

Man Machine Poem

Yer beau-
tiful
terrific.
Your eyes
empty
Pacifics.

Man Machine Poem

Man Machine Poem