06-09-2024, 03:01 AM
This reminds me of 30s soft jazz era, in how simple the lyrics present, covered by prairie family folk bands. But the lyrics are also fairly Lou Reed like 'perfect day/ here she comes now'
O you were mine
I think would sound better
When you were mine
And ain't good at the end is kinda cheap, 'isn't good' while cheating the syllables kinda adds a flair
I wonder if you started writing this with literally 'a long long time ago' or if that came later. I'm not sold on it but the enjambment is cute.
Thanks for sharing, would you care if I added unauthorized music?
O you were mine
I think would sound better
When you were mine
And ain't good at the end is kinda cheap, 'isn't good' while cheating the syllables kinda adds a flair
I wonder if you started writing this with literally 'a long long time ago' or if that came later. I'm not sold on it but the enjambment is cute.
Thanks for sharing, would you care if I added unauthorized music?
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