06-04-2024, 05:12 AM
I just want to say that I hope the new title and additional stanzas bring some clarity.
The story/journey that I have attempted to convey is much, much more than just someone finding their voice. Being voiceless (and invisible and empty) were symptoms of deep wounds and heavy burdens (indicated by being lost, broken, drowning). The voice that has "been found" is evidence of the healing that has occurred, rather than being the objective. This poem itself is evidence of that voice.
Finally, learning to trust and to hope were important aspects of that healing.
Thanks to all who have commented, and to all who have read my poem. As it now stands, this poem feels complete.
The story/journey that I have attempted to convey is much, much more than just someone finding their voice. Being voiceless (and invisible and empty) were symptoms of deep wounds and heavy burdens (indicated by being lost, broken, drowning). The voice that has "been found" is evidence of the healing that has occurred, rather than being the objective. This poem itself is evidence of that voice.
Finally, learning to trust and to hope were important aspects of that healing.
Thanks to all who have commented, and to all who have read my poem. As it now stands, this poem feels complete.