06-02-2024, 02:26 PM
I’ve written lots of scifi sonnets. This is one. It’s kinda a boring one.
But there’s a neat idea in it that, granted, needs more fireworks.
Here’s the question: what would it be like if there was an intelligent butterfly species?
I’m guessing it’d be intelligent as a caterpillar, and then again as a butterfly, and in between it would be soup in a cocoon. This isn’t a poem that needs attention. There’s nothing particularly lovely about it. There’s nothing gruesome, either. It’s rather inert.
I’m fine with that, but also am open to the idea that I can push it into something more interesting.
But there’s a neat idea in it that, granted, needs more fireworks.
Here’s the question: what would it be like if there was an intelligent butterfly species?
I’m guessing it’d be intelligent as a caterpillar, and then again as a butterfly, and in between it would be soup in a cocoon. This isn’t a poem that needs attention. There’s nothing particularly lovely about it. There’s nothing gruesome, either. It’s rather inert.
I’m fine with that, but also am open to the idea that I can push it into something more interesting.
A yak is normal.