05-31-2024, 09:30 PM
(05-27-2024, 07:58 AM)busker Wrote: Look closelyHi Busker,
When he saw the blood red lips
of Aphrodite -
her alabaster hips, and hair
like bright sunrise,
did he also see the ship sails deep within
her wine dark eyes?
I just wanted to stop by and say that I have enjoyed this. I don't really have any suggestions. It does read like a good opening stanza of a longer poem, perhaps?
take care,
bryn