"Letter to Natalie" (Self-Harm, Suicide, Language)

[Tiger the Lion]

I'm new here.  What strikes me about the poem isn't anything technical.  What I hear is the voice of an angry man blaming a woman for all his problems, and then ending the poem with fantasies of murder.  If you really believe what you have written, then you need to mature as a person and stop blaming other people for your problems.  We all want to be loved; but if we are filled with hate, it doesn't always come.  You come across as a misogynist and a predator in this poem.  God help the women who get involved with you.

Hello Pjames and welcome to the site. Thank you for your participation so far. Just a reminder that the writer and the narrator are not always the same thing. While your response is natural, it may very well be aimed at a fictional character. I'd be locked up if the authorities believed my narrators.