05-25-2024, 02:47 PM
I'm new here. What strikes me about the poem isn't anything technical. What I hear is the voice of an angry man blaming a woman for all his problems, and then ending the poem with fantasies of murder. If you really believe what you have written, then you need to mature as a person and stop blaming other people for your problems. We all want to be loved; but if we are filled with hate, it doesn't always come. You come across as a misogynist and a predator in this poem. God help the women who get involved with you.