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Awake
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05-25-2024, 02:34 PM
The poem has an immediate or realistic quality, meaning that I can feel the tension of the moments. But I get a little confused when I read
the grip on her arm stretching like rubber, and Who is gripping her arm, and how does the boy know her arm is being gripped if he is just hearing sounds? |
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Awake - by Semicircle - 05-13-2024, 04:11 AM
RE: Awake - by Tiger the Lion - 05-13-2024, 07:15 AM
RE: Awake - by TranquillityBase - 05-14-2024, 02:16 AM
RE: Awake - by Semicircle - 05-14-2024, 11:49 AM
RE: Awake - by Mark A Becker - 05-16-2024, 12:49 AM
RE: Awake - by Semicircle - 05-16-2024, 04:26 AM
RE: Awake (New title: In Stasis) - by Semicircle - 05-17-2024, 04:24 AM
RE: Awake (New title: In Stasis) - by Knot - 05-17-2024, 11:51 PM
RE: Awake (New title: In Stasis) - by Mark A Becker - 05-18-2024, 07:10 AM
RE: Awake - by Semicircle - 05-20-2024, 12:51 AM
RE: Awake - by Pjames - 05-25-2024, 02:34 PM
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