cream of wheat (edit 1)

[armadillosarecool]

Hi busker,

Thanks for the kind words and comments.

I agree that the "i" breakaway might be a bit over the top, but I kind of like it anyway... I'll think on it and see if anything better pops into my head that blows me away.

As for inferring the daughter instead of a caretaker, I'm not sure. I intended it as a tragic story, with the situation being that the speaker is alone, losing his grasp on his reality, and the only companionship he has is a caretaker that wants to be anywhere but with him.

I appreciate your input!

Best,

aac