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cream of wheat (edit 1)

armadillosarecool
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05-23-2024, 04:23 AM

Hey SC,

I made a small revision, see what you think. There's still a ways to go with this one, but I think it's an improvement.

Best,

aac

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cream of wheat (edit 1) - by armadillosarecool - 05-21-2024, 02:36 PM

RE: cream of wheat - by Semicircle - 05-21-2024, 11:39 PM

RE: cream of wheat - by armadillosarecool - 05-22-2024, 01:00 AM

RE: cream of wheat - by Semicircle - 05-22-2024, 01:58 PM

RE: cream of wheat - by armadillosarecool - 05-23-2024, 04:23 AM

RE: cream of wheat (edit 1) - by armadillosarecool - 05-25-2024, 12:51 AM

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