05-22-2024, 10:38 PM
Thank you Bryn -
The italics only indicate a different rhyme scheme. But to save confusion I've changed them back - and fixed the typo.
I don't think I can ditch the punch-line for the sake of some padding - this is brevity...
'hanging by a thread' is a whopping cliche........................N
The italics only indicate a different rhyme scheme. But to save confusion I've changed them back - and fixed the typo.
I don't think I can ditch the punch-line for the sake of some padding - this is brevity...
'hanging by a thread' is a whopping cliche........................N