05-22-2024, 01:40 AM
Hello Tiger -
A nice shorty - succinct and punchy,
Not so sure about the last line - perhaps overstating things and a bit twee...
maybe-
embittered writer
pissing slush
on our parade
Good insight here - all us poets can relate.................N
A nice shorty - succinct and punchy,
Not so sure about the last line - perhaps overstating things and a bit twee...
maybe-
embittered writer
pissing slush
on our parade
Good insight here - all us poets can relate.................N