Awake

Awake

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#12

05-20-2024, 12:51 AM

I lost confidence on 'In Stasis' haha. Awake works better.
Made some changes and I'm getting to a happy point with this one.

Knot-- Thanks for the critiques. You have been very helpful to me.

Mark-- I appreciate the encouragement. Maybe if I get really good at making poetry, that skill will translate over to undressing lovers.

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Awake - by Semicircle - 05-13-2024, 04:11 AM

RE: Awake - by Tiger the Lion - 05-13-2024, 07:15 AM

RE: Awake - by busker - 05-13-2024, 12:04 PM

RE: Awake - by TranquillityBase - 05-14-2024, 02:16 AM

RE: Awake - by Semicircle - 05-14-2024, 11:49 AM

RE: Awake - by Mark A Becker - 05-16-2024, 12:49 AM

RE: Awake - by Semicircle - 05-16-2024, 04:26 AM

RE: Awake - by Knot - 05-17-2024, 01:14 AM

RE: Awake (New title: In Stasis) - by Semicircle - 05-17-2024, 04:24 AM

RE: Awake (New title: In Stasis) - by Knot - 05-17-2024, 11:51 PM

RE: Awake (New title: In Stasis) - by Mark A Becker - 05-18-2024, 07:10 AM

RE: Awake - by Semicircle - 05-20-2024, 12:51 AM

RE: Awake - by busker - 05-22-2024, 01:50 PM

RE: Awake - by Pjames - 05-25-2024, 02:34 PM

RE: Awake - by Wjames - 05-26-2024, 02:19 PM

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