05-14-2024, 11:49 AM
Tiger --
It is good to be back, I was waiting for a good time to rejoin the ranks, and then it happened. I was not married to the repetition, I usually try to avoid it if I can. Thanks for the critique.
Busker--
Appreciate your feedback. The poem is mostly auditory, the little boy does not have context for what is going on in the bathroom.
Tranq--
Feigning is a good call. I agree that the stanzas should combine. Thanks.
Missed you guys.
It is good to be back, I was waiting for a good time to rejoin the ranks, and then it happened. I was not married to the repetition, I usually try to avoid it if I can. Thanks for the critique.
Busker--
Appreciate your feedback. The poem is mostly auditory, the little boy does not have context for what is going on in the bathroom.
Tranq--
Feigning is a good call. I agree that the stanzas should combine. Thanks.
Missed you guys.