Ashes
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CircleWalker- You're totally good and this poem was inspired by the town I live in (Missoula MT). The Rattlesnake area of town is sacred to indigenous folks. Though the burnt church is fictitious there are schools / homes built on-top of indigenous burial sites. The aim to highlight the nature of colonialism and the space in-between western religion and indigenous spirituality.

There are even stories of haunted homes ect...

I feel like spirits (though it breaks like 5 / 7 / 5 haiku format) would have been a great word to use, since some indigenous hold ancestral spirits in high regard. Settling for "ghosts" is pretty a western word, so I'm glad you brought it up. Thanks aton for the ideas an feedback
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Ashes - by Bunx - 04-25-2024, 09:05 AM
RE: Ashes - by TranquillityBase - 04-25-2024, 10:28 AM
RE: Ashes - by Bunx - 04-25-2024, 12:01 PM
RE: Ashes - by TranquillityBase - 04-29-2024, 02:45 AM
RE: Ashes - by CircleWalker - 04-29-2024, 06:37 AM
RE: Ashes - by Bunx - 04-29-2024, 12:44 PM
RE: Ashes - by CircleWalker - 04-29-2024, 02:54 PM
RE: Ashes - by Bunx - 05-05-2024, 12:49 AM
RE: Ashes - by CircleWalker - 05-11-2024, 06:30 AM
RE: Ashes - by Bunx - 05-10-2024, 06:07 AM
RE: Ashes - by Bunx - 05-15-2024, 06:41 AM



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